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It's Just Part Of The Process by ~kamiana:iconkamiana:



That sock under the table should mean nothing to me,
but it’s laying next to a bottle of nail polish remover
triggering memories of you and your black fingernails.

The fogged up windows of that minivan should register
only a casual glance as I walk by,
but it’s got me thinking about that night,
sitting in the back of the truck, writing notes on the windows.

And when your friends tell me that
what you’ve done is horrible, I should be able to agree,
but instead I can only remember all the moments
that made me fall in love with you again and again.

Because nothing works the way it should now, does it?
In three years you were engraved into
each and every square inch of my mind, so that,
for now at least, all the silly, little, insignificant things
bring back thoughts of you and me.
©2008-2009 ~kamiana
:iconkamiana:

Author's Comments

full title: it's just part of the process, right?

so, break-ups kind of suck, and this is the first time i've really had my heart broken, so it really sucks.

this is completely autobiographical, every part has actually happened to me in the last month, but i think this should get the need to write about it out of my system.

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:iconmadhatterzwei:
Wow. I love all of the concrete details. I thought that all of the stanzas would have a certain amount of line, an even length, to them. When they didn't, it disconcerted me a bit. If you could work on evening them out, I think this would be even better. :]

--
It grieves me that this is not a dirigible,
that the sea stows us as a song in the belly of a maestro...
Oliver de la Paz
:iconkamiana:
lol, that's funny because usually all my poems have very even lines and i always worried that it was boring, so i was trying to move away from that with this one. i'll have to look it over and see about evening them out, and decide which way i like it best.

thanx for the suggestion.

--
"i'm alright in bed, but i'm better with a pen."
:iconmadhatterzwei:
Haha, well I guess next time I should do a little back reading before saying anything! In that case, this is a good way to break out of that habit.

--
It grieves me that this is not a dirigible,
that the sea stows us as a song in the belly of a maestro...
Oliver de la Paz
:iconkamiana:
lol.

--
"i'm alright in bed, but i'm better with a pen."

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