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Tumbled Down The Stairs Again by ~kamiana:iconkamiana:



fixing a broken heart is kind of like
climbing stairs on your hands and knees,
and every time you think you’re
making some progress
you set your hand wrong, or
miss the step with your knee,
and go tumbling down to the bottom again.
you break some bones,
get some new bumps and bruises,
and each time it gets a little bit harder
to pick yourself up and
start climbing again.

and sometimes you just don’t.
it seems you fall head over heels out of love too.
©2008-2009 ~kamiana
:iconkamiana:

Author's Comments

this is how i've been feeling lately.

edit: i really wanted that line in the poem, but i didn't think of it until i posted, so now it's part of the poem. not a big change, but yeah.

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:iconmerika:
I shared this with one of my roommates she thought it was amazing too. She said she liked the analogy of falling head over heels. Just remember pumpkin, you are amazing. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

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He was the sort of person who stood on mountain tops during thunderstorms in wet copper armour shouting, "All the Gods are bastards."
:iconkamiana:
well i'm glad she enjoyed it too.

it's too bad i didn't come up with the head over heels analogy until the poem was finished.

p.s. i hope you know that whenever i'm feeling like a failure i'm going to talk to you, cause every time i talk to you you tell me i'm amazing. lol

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"i'm alright in bed, but i'm better with a pen."
:iconkamiana:
haha, now the analogy is part of the poem.

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"i'm alright in bed, but i'm better with a pen."
:iconmerika:
Hey I only speak the truth!

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He was the sort of person who stood on mountain tops during thunderstorms in wet copper armour shouting, "All the Gods are bastards."

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